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Not bad so far dude......

I got to say, I really don't enjoy Sonic flashes that don't have Shadow in it. However, I will critique on the film itself. It's not bad so far. You've got a good strotyline, the aniamtion is pretty good. I suggest for future installments making some edits of ur own for it, maybe some custom poses etc. Also, maybe vary your sounds a bit more, look around the net for some other sonic game sound effects and such.

Well keep up the good work. Peace Out, :)

Akradon responds:

lol. b surprised how many ppl av asked where shadow is....hes on his way dont worry......

Ok let's see here....

Well, let's see here, the animation was fair. The sprites were recolored so there was some effort to those. The story needs a little more of your own originality to it. It was a little TO much like GT. Pretty decent though. I would've advised against using the actual dragon balls to represent themselves, would've been better if you used the chaos emeralds or even the crystal stars from papermario "The Thousand Year Door". That's just my suggestion though. Also use more sounds in the next eps., there weren't too many sound effects in this, other than DBZ. One last thing as well, nice to see that other people like to use the same style of phtotoshop ending as I do.

Peace Out, :D

Not bad at all.....

I'd say pretty good start so far, a little short and draggy in some spots, but it looks like ya got a good story going here. Quick question though, why is it called "DoD". I ask because that's the short way to say my series name, mine stands for Dawning of Darkness, your's as well?

Peace Out, :D

Cool, and here's a little advice.......

Well, I must say you've gotten better. However, I think you over did the intro. It was better than the actual episode, I felt. I also suggest for future episodes making the screen and sprite size larger they're a bit to small and just a few spelling errors here and there. Other than that, great story line, and good music. Keep up the good work.

Peace Out, :D

Shi-Gu responds:

Oh thankyou! I know you! You were in the Sonic&Shadow Collab with me! :D
yeah, maybe the intro was exagerated but if I just had the chance to ensamble part 1 with part 2 the intro would be nothing, by the way, in part two I learned to use Flash camera, so the sprites will look better with zoom, and I'm making episode 5 right now and the screen is 550 x 400
Thankyou for not saying this is a copy of SMBZ like everyone say and about the storyline, I'm trying to do the most exciting plot and far from SMBZ's plot

You've got potential

This was a good start. I reccomend for your next flash, to remove all of the bg from the sheets on the sprites. They're are many Tuts. on the net and here on NG that can help with these kind of things. Other than that, nice job, try using a faster FPS for future flashes. I liked how you edited gaara out of the sheet so shadow could just use the sand sprites. Good Creative thinking, nice work.
Keep it up.

Peace Out, :D

Very good for a beginner....

The sprite edits were done well I must say, just need a little more practice. I suggest for your next episode use some more sound effects from megaman games, a lot of DBZ sounds in there, (even though people constantly use them including myself, lol). Also some extra sprite special effects, however, I did like you made a lot of your SFX in flash such as the blasts and energy attacks. Animation was pretty decent, I just suggest you use a higher FPS for sprites, I reccomend 20-24 for the FPS. A fast Frame rate gives a more realistic look to sprites. Good luck on your next animation.

Peace Out, :D

magmadragoon11 responds:

Man thanks.I will try to put more sounds of Dbz!

Once again my friend.....

You have done an excellent job, great fluent aniamtion, the fights were great, and the humor as well. Not much too say, just keep up the great work my man.

Peace Out, :D

Nice job man.....

The fight scenes were well animated. The animation was smooth. Props for using characters that most people normally don't use. That shows originality. The storyline is nicely thought out. All in all a good flash. I just reccomend using some more sound effects outside of DBZ and perhaps some extra sprite SFX.

Peace Out, :D

dark-phantom1 responds:

Very thanks for the review.=)

Well it was good for a 1st flash....

However, I have some suggestions. One maybe get some more sound effects and a few special effects sprites. For some good extra sprites check the bbs for help or post a topic of your own. Preferably in the flash forum.

Same goes for sound effects. Also, I suggest using a faster fps such as at least 20 - 24 for sprites. Makes the animation smoother. And make sure to remove all the white on the sprites b4 you put them on the stage.

The fight was good. But there's no way Shadow would've lost to Zero, especially not by a head slice off, and I like them both. When doing VS. movies it's best to create a choice of who will win at then end.

Well, hopes this info helps for when ya make your next flash.

Peace Out, :D

Absolute-Zer0 responds:

thanks for the advice(I know this response is a few years late) but i havn't been on flash in awhile, tho i still remember the jist of it. I really awsn't sure about fps at the time but I'll definitly try a one more than 12fps next time -_- and i only realized the white i left in the sprites when i watched it again >.< And nao that i have the DBZ sound pack i think i'll have some better sounds. Soyea thanks for the advice

wasn't bad......

Not a bad start man, but it could use some custom edits to make it a lil better, the music didn't really seem to fit the situation, and I advise not using text on the top and bottom of the screen at the same time. Maybe use the space-bar coding next time, so people have time to read it all. Good storyline though, it has potential. I just reccomend making some poses on your own next time to give it a more realistic look, maybe new fight poses or idles. Some spots were a little to quiet maybe add more sound effects next time. Good work man.

Peace Out, :D

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