Brilliant...
You've always been one of my favorite drawn animators, and this was excellent as usual. Didn't have as much humor as I've normally expected from you, but I enjoyed this better with less comedy. The artwork is a unique style and the coloring and effects rocked. Also, the music had a very metallic feel to it, and Three Days Grace to boot, nice touch. The story was amazing, which is something that's very hard to come by today. Also, I hope you deicde to make something of this one day, whether you further it into a series with voice actors or simply as a novel. Either way, you really should progress it.
God Bless
Shade