Your story is still interesting enough, and you've improved a bit, however your visual effects still need work(cody's black eye was on the wrong side at one point, the door slamming of the Mettalix could've used some indents as they were bashing through etc.) your camera work still needs improvements with panning and zooms and the mouth movements (along with the characters) need more movement/mannerism displayed. The characters lack much emotion/drama for what the voice actors are conveying. I can go into more detail over a Skype Conversation some time if you'd like but this is just some basic points for now.
Nice work, and thanks for using my characters. However, ss124 did not make my Beasts or Clones. He only helped sprite the sheets. So please remove his copyright credit. Thank you.
It's a great animation, but any buttons beyond the actual "Title Screen" don't work. The skip button for the "On the previous episode information", the scene select buttons, none of them work properly. Also, if you accidentally press space-bar during a non-dialogue part, it skips the whole scene. A glitch commonly found when using the 16k Move Clip bypass trick, and is the result of poor coding. So while it's animated well, and drawn excellently, for that many technically mistakes, I can only give you a 3. As I would never have uploaded a flash to NG with this many errors.
Glad you have been following up my work, and um, yeah we could use some tips when it comes to actionscripting for that matter, as its my own weak side. Im an animation editor, not an actionscript editor. I expect Majin to do all that for me, whereas i provide animation fixing. So what we will need is that you teach him how to do this properly.
But it seemed redundant after a while, as if it would never end, finally after wave 37 waves I gave up. Last year's game, Accelerant, was much more well thought out, based on on of the episodes of madness, had a bit of an adventure concept to it since you had to move through the whole landscape, and it flowed better, but lagging is to be expected when you have that many vector effects on screen, particularly all the flames of the flame thrower. But I digress, I suggest next year's game be another episode of the series like accelerant was about the clown one, maybe try one with the Auditor next time around. All in all, great programming.
Was pretty good...
Just work on the dialouge a lil more on the next lesbian one you make, only because the main character seemed a lil to much like a guy in her text bubbles, and add in some more kissing next time. Lesbians kiss a lot and this was really lacking in here. Other than that nice job.
Enough said really. The sprites are fantastic and the programming is great.
I like this very much.
I am definetly using this in DoD.
Really ? Thanks for using this in your flash, then, mate !
And of course this of all things is under-rated. Unless it's fan-art or sex, people pay no attention or don't have the intelligence to comprehend anything else.
Nice work, love the facial detail.
lol thanks and i have to agree that most of NG are basement pervs With that said im off to watch porn :P
I am almost finished with this clay guy legs are almost dried and ill have more clothes on him
What the guy below me said. Despite NG's new proclamations, it still panders primarily towards fan-art and sexual works.
This is fantastic.
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